A good description answers the questions a buyer would ask you in the shop: what is it, what is it for, will it fit, what does it come with, and why buy it from you. Answer those clearly and you get fewer questions and more orders.
Quick answer: Use this order: (1) a clear name with the words buyers search (type, size, colour, brand if genuine); (2) one or two sentences on what it is and who it is for; (3) key details as bullet points (size, material, capacity, power, compatibility); (4) what is in the box; (5) delivery, warranty and how to order. Write in plain language and never claim what you cannot back up.
Buyers search for things like "baby romper 0–12 months" or "manual liquid filling machine", not "Item 23". Put the product type first, then key details: "Warm Baby Rompers (0–12 Months), 6-Piece Pack" beats "Lovely set". On Buy More Mall, your dashboard shows the searches that match your products: use those words.
| Section | What to write |
|---|---|
| Opening | What it is and who it is for, in one or two sentences |
| Key features | 3–6 bullet points with facts: size, material, capacity, power, colours |
| Sizes / specs | A size chart or spec table where it matters |
| In the box | Everything included (and what is not) |
| Use and care | How to use, wash or maintain it |
| Delivery and warranty | Delivery areas and time, warranty, returns |
| Call to action | Buy now, or ask on WhatsApp for bulk prices |
"Soft cotton rompers for babies aged 0–12 months, warm enough for cold mornings and easy to change with snap buttons. Pack of 6 in mixed colours. Machine washable at 30°C. Delivery across Kenya; order on Buy More Mall or ask on WhatsApp for wholesale."
"Manual liquid and paste filling machine for small factories filling juice, honey, oil or lotion. Adjustable fill volume, stainless steel contact parts, no electricity needed. Includes nozzle and hopper. Ask us which nozzle suits your product's thickness."
"20 mm (1/2") PPR pipe, 4 m length, for hot and cold water supply in homes. Joins with PPR fittings by heat fusion. Sold per length; ask for bulk prices for projects."
Sellers whose descriptions are very short get a reminder on their Buy More Mall dashboard, because detailed listings get more trust.
Say what it is and who it is for, list key facts in bullets, state what is included and finish with how to buy.
Long enough to answer buyers' questions: often 80–200 words, more for machines and technical items.
Include fabric, sizes (with a size chart), fit, colours, care instructions and photos worn.
Yes, the words buyers search, used naturally in the name and first sentence.
Rewrite it in your own words and remove other sellers' names and links.
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